Am i feeling lucky? part one.

Posted May 14, 2009 by stuartharley / comments 2 comments / Print / Font Size Decrease font size Increase font size

Here is the beginning of a romantic tale, that will see challanges and happiness in equal measures. One question: is it true or is it false?

I think that taking a chance on life is the easiest thing to do,

but taking a chance on love is the hardest.

I saw her crossing the school hall, i knew that she was the most beautiful thing i had ever seen, Her eyes pierced my heart and seemed to see everything that i was about. She knew what i felt i could see it in her face. Her deep piercing blue eyes scanned my body, and then met my eyes. As she did my heart froze, stricken stone cold. I just stared back at her unable to move, for she had a hold of me and she seemed unable to let go, as i was with her.  

Her grayish complexion standing radiant in the sun, as her hair flowed in the wind. She was almost walking in slow motion to me, her eyes still fixed on mine. As she got nearer she raised her long slender arm, with its slender spindly fingers and beautiful long clear vanished nails. She held out her hand and shook mine.

"I am autumn." she had said breathlessly still staring at my eyes deeply. She seemed almost intrigued by me and i was with her. 

"Stuart." i said with the same breathless voice. Suddenly she nodded slowly and then brushed past me, with the scent of summer flowers left hanging in the air. As my nostrils flared with this beautiful smell, i fell in love with this girl i had just met.  As i turned to follow i found her staring back at me, over her shoulder. There was something.

We were in the same class and we chose to sit beside each other and as we did, i got another blast of her wonderful perfume. As i stared at her, the dark nature of her intrigued me, the deep dark eyes seem to stare into nothing. Her hair dropped obscuring the side of her face that rested inches from me, she must have sensed that i was staring intently at her, for her head turned slowly, and her eyes were once again staring at me. This time her thin lips had turned into a wonderful beautiful smile. I could not believe how many times i had fallen in love with her in the small space of time but i fell in love again. I raised my hand and she flinched slightly, but allowed me to move her hair from her face, as my finger brushed against her skin its coldness made my whole body shudder. I moved closer and our faces seemed to get closer and closer before they met in a passionate kiss. We did not care about the class of people now standing looking at us as we embraced. As we pulled away i could see that her eyes were still closed, but as they opened she continued to look at me intently and my breath seemed to stick in my throat.

What had just happened?  I have never felt like this about anyone and i have never kissed anyone so quickly, but i got drawn in by her strange charm, her strange vampish charm and the piercing eyes.

I loved her and i had to take my chance as the bell went, i grabbed her hand and asked her to follow me which she did with no resistance. As we stood staring out in to the sun, the grayish color of her face seemed fade and the red cheeks appeared as she smiled at me staring at the sun. I leaned in again, our hands intertwined together our lips pouted, i wanted to kiss her again, my hands moved to encase her face and we kissed again, her face was no longer cold but flushed with warmth and color.

We sat all day after school just watching the moon appear over the hill and we still sat long into the night wrapped in each others body on the cold grass. As the stars appeared i stared at this wonderful creature and saw that the stars danced upon her skin and the moonlight illuminated her eyes like glowing orbs in the dark. She rested her head on my chest and soon we fell asleep together, wrapped in new love its warmth defeating the nightly chilled air.

I will take a chance, on this i must take a chance. 

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stuartharley
stuartharley said... on May 15th, 2009 at 8:03 PM

there is more six parts of it! most can already be found at triond .com but i will upload them here soon

KingKong
KingKong said... on May 15th, 2009 at 2:52 PM
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Love it. Is there a part 2?



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