The Girl with Pink Flowers

Posted Mar 23, 2009 by CutestPrincess / comments 2 comments / Print / Font Size Decrease font size Increase font size

I opened my eyes and I saw a girl with pink flowers. She was so beautiful... so innocent!

I opened my eyes. I saw a light shining down on me. I tried to reach for it, but on my way I heard someone crying.

It was a girl with pink flowers. She's so beautiful, so innocent, so.... I looked at her and wonder what could she be doing alone in a filthy place like this. I watch her cry her heart out with silent whispers I barely can hear.

Murmurs of guilt, anger, and sadness, that is all that I can get. I move closer and I see her eyes, so weary and confused. I tried to come closer, but the light distracted me. It was becoming brighter, almost like calling me to reach for it. I was going through the light, but there was something that kept me holding back.

I tried to ignore the light and went for the girl again. I wanted to comfort her and tell her that every thing's going to be alright. I went beside her and surprisingly she rested her head on my shoulders. I was shocked! Does she know I was there? Can she fell me? Suddenly, she whispered the clearest words I've ever heard her say... "I'm Sorry!"

As she said those words I started to feel nauseous. I felt like I can't breathe! Every thing's becoming a blur around me. I need air! Please help me! The light its coming for me. It's becoming brighter and brighter. I can't feel my head! My bodies floating! And in one breath, everything turned black. read more...

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h20ho
h20ho said... on May 6th, 2009 at 7:53 PM

I like how you read more on auth spot :D Great story!

bickparker
bickparker said... on March 24th, 2009 at 12:33 PM

Is that the same CutestPrincess as on Triond?  Anyhow, I’ve just rated you top stars.  Happy writing!



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